Ello! Now for contest number 3! Best short story or writing sample. The winner was chosen at random as the other judge was being stubborn and wouldn't read the entries on the computer. Any way, the winner is..*drum roll*.. Journee!

Contestants:
Journee
Quinn

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Thursday, April 21, 2011

Tarika's Journey parts one and two

Part one:

Tarika's Decision

Tarika sat down with her brother Jace to fix a droid. While they worked Tarika asked "Would you wanna be a jedi if you could?" Hr shrugged and asked "Why? Does my little sister want to be one?" Tarika hated him calling her his little sister. They are twins, both 9 years old but Jace acted so much older. Tarika shoved Jace and said "I'm not younger than you and I don't know. I mean doesn't everybody? Jace thought about it a moment then said "Yea and they still need more jedi. The war may be over but that doesn't mean there is peace every where." The two of them continued working on the droid. Tarika thought about what her brother had said. Maybe she could be a jedi, all she knew was that she would have to talk to her parents.


Part two:

Tarika's Proposition

Later that day Tarika went into her parent's room and layed down on the bed until they returned from town. They got home and went to their room ready to relax however they were far from relaxing. When they walked in Tarika sat up and waved slightly. They sat down on either side of her and her mother asked "What's wrong?" Tarika shook her head and said "Wrong? Nothing is wrong. I was talking to Jace earlier while we were working on the droid and decided I want to be a jedi." Her parents exchanged surprised glances then her mother asked "Why?" Tarika looked up at her and said "It's like Jace said. The war's over but there still isn't peace everywhere."

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