Ello! Now for contest number 3! Best short story or writing sample. The winner was chosen at random as the other judge was being stubborn and wouldn't read the entries on the computer. Any way, the winner is..*drum roll*.. Journee!

Contestants:
Journee
Quinn

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Saturday, April 23, 2011

bored part four

Part four. Sorry 'bout it taking so long. It got to the point where I just made myself get my butt movin' and do this.

     Steven stood up after breakfast and took care of his dishes. He walked outside and relaxed on the hammock. He fell asleep for about half an hour then woke up as two people walked up to his house. The men introduced themselves as agents Jensen and Ashthore from the BAU. They asked if he could answer some questions and Steven said yes so they went inside and sat down in the living room. 
     Jensen started out saying "We need to know what kind of person Austin is and what kind of people he hung out with to be sure he fit's the victimology." Steven replied "Well he's stuck up brags about eveything from being the school's star QB to his older sister joining the BAU. He hung out with the 'cool kids' at school but he really only is friends with Desmond. He lives down the road I can take you there if you want." Jensen said "Steven take Ashthore to Desmond's house. I'll wait here." Steven nodded and took the agent to Desmond's house.
     Steven knocked on the door. When Desmond's mom opened the door Steven asked if Desmond was home. She nodded and hollered for Desmond. When Desmond got down his mom went back to what she was doing and he asked "What's going on?" The agent said "I'm agent Ashthore. I'm with the FBI. We are investigating your friend Austin's disappearance." Desmond looked at Steven and Ashthore then said "Wow you guys got the FBI in on this but I really don't know anything. If I could help I promise I would but I don't know anything." Steven told Ashthore he'd better be getting back to Jensen. Steven ran down the road back to his house. He walked up the stairs to the porch and went inside. He sat down and answered Jensen's questions. After a while Jensen stood and said he had to get back to the station. Once Jensen left Steven stood from his chair and walked down the street to the bus stop. He stood there for about 30 minutes then got on a bus that only had three others on it.
     When he reached his destination he got out, went to the door and knocked. It was a few minutes until the door opened. At the door was a man a few years older than Austin. He had short choppy hair cut. His dark hair hadn't been brushed so it fell in his face hardly showing his brown eyes. The man signaled for Steven to come in so he did. Steven knew exactly where to go, that would be the basement. He went down leaving the man behind. Steven smiled evilly when he saw a familiar face chained up in the corner. The familiar face would have to be his brother, Austin. He was asleep so Steven had no reason to worry about being recognized. Steven obviously couldn't have done this himself so naturally he got the unsub that his sister was trying find. That way they'd never pin Steven to Austin's disappearance unless he got sold out but he doubted that would happen. Now that he was sure the job was done he could rest easy that his problems were finally going to come to an end.
     Steven walked back upstairs and told the man to do whatever he wanted to Austin then Steven returned home before anyone could even know he left. He went to his room and layed down to take a nap though he couldn't get to sleep. He eventually played some video games on his Xbox live with his friends for a bit then went to go do some other stuff to relax.

Friday, April 22, 2011

pic

Just one drawing this time but I'm really stinkin' proud of it. It's a girl named Fate. Sorry bout it bein' crooked


Thursday, April 21, 2011

I got a title for this

Broken Family

The Secret is out

Jo got up to her room and went in. She went over to the desk and sat down as Emily asked how the food was. Jo shrugged said it was ok as she grabbed a paper and pen. Emily sat up and asked "Where'd you really go?" Jo put down the pen before she could write anything and said "Zack." Emily flipped off the tv and said "Jo you can't make him help."
"I'm not."
"Coulda fooled me."
"I only asked. He said he'd help. It was is choice and you know just as well as I do that we need Shannon."
"How can Zack find her?"
"Same way he found James."
Emily's eyes shot open and she stammered "Y-y-you said you found James." Jo sighed and said "I tried to tell you I didn't do it alone but you wouldn't listen." Emily stood up and walked into the room and locked the door leaving Jo alone.

The Letter

Jo went into her room and sat down at the desk grabbing pen and paper as Emily asked how the food was. Jo shrugged and it was OK. Emily flipped off the TV and asked "Where'd you really go?" Jo set down the pen before being able to write and said "Zack." Emily sighed and said "You can't make him help."
"I'm not."
"Coulda fooled me."
"I only asked. He said he'd help and you know we need him so we can find Shannon."
"What if she won't help?"
"Then we go on with life same as we have been."
"What if Zack tries to scam us? You know he's a con artist."
"What do we have that he would want? A few bucks? We have nothing for him to take."
"Why are you defending him Jo?"
Jo took a breath then said "Because he found James."
"What? You said you found him." Emily exclaimed almost yelling.
"With help. I tried to tell you but you wouldn't listen."
Emily scoffed, stood up and went into the bedroom locking the door behind her.

Jo sat in silence for a minute then grabbed the pen and wrote a letter saying the following:

Dear Shannon 3/22/2011

Hi my name's Jo Carter. Even tho we've
never met I know we are cousins so could
you please help me and my sister? I know
your a psychiatrist or something and that's
exactly what we need some one who can
get inside peoples minds and help them.
My brother needs you. Please help us.

Your cousin,
Jo Carter

After that Jo went to sleep on the couch watching Criminal Minds. The next morning Emily woke up long before Jo so she quietly walked past her to the door. Half way there she saw the letter sitting on the desk. She picked it up and read it quickly then left it there as she went down to the food court. She got her food and waited for Zack who was working the breakfast shift. When he saw she looked like she was done he came over to take her plates. She gave him the plates and told him they needed to talk. He nodded and went on with his work. When his shift ended he came back to Emily and sat down. She looked at him critically and asked "What do you know about Shannon?" Zack thought about it a minute then said "I know she's your cousin and she can help you and Jo get out of trouble with James somehow. I'm not sure how. Why?" Emily shook her head and said "It's nothing now please stay out of my life and out of Jo's life." as she stood and started to walk off. Zack stood and grabbed her wrist, looking her in the eye for what seemed like a solid minute before saying "I got you into this I'll get you out." Emily yanked free and went back to her room before Jo woke up.
So what'd ya'll think?

Tarika's Journey parts one and two

Part one:

Tarika's Decision

Tarika sat down with her brother Jace to fix a droid. While they worked Tarika asked "Would you wanna be a jedi if you could?" Hr shrugged and asked "Why? Does my little sister want to be one?" Tarika hated him calling her his little sister. They are twins, both 9 years old but Jace acted so much older. Tarika shoved Jace and said "I'm not younger than you and I don't know. I mean doesn't everybody? Jace thought about it a moment then said "Yea and they still need more jedi. The war may be over but that doesn't mean there is peace every where." The two of them continued working on the droid. Tarika thought about what her brother had said. Maybe she could be a jedi, all she knew was that she would have to talk to her parents.


Part two:

Tarika's Proposition

Later that day Tarika went into her parent's room and layed down on the bed until they returned from town. They got home and went to their room ready to relax however they were far from relaxing. When they walked in Tarika sat up and waved slightly. They sat down on either side of her and her mother asked "What's wrong?" Tarika shook her head and said "Wrong? Nothing is wrong. I was talking to Jace earlier while we were working on the droid and decided I want to be a jedi." Her parents exchanged surprised glances then her mother asked "Why?" Tarika looked up at her and said "It's like Jace said. The war's over but there still isn't peace everywhere."

Friday, April 15, 2011

photoshopped pics

So here's some pics i found online and photoshopped for some char bios.
This here is Caelum. He's actually a story char and not a rpg
 Caylin is a Hylan. AKA The same race as Link from Legend of Zelda.
 Evil Caylin. This is actually my profile pic on a site.
 Criysis here is an elven bounty hunter. I didn't do a real good job with her hair but I think you guys get the idea.
 Yureka is a Vampire. She lives alone, in a hospital where she can keep all the blood she needs.

I hope you like the pics. Now I gotta go post some char bios. BYE BYE BLOG!!!!!!!!!!!!

Monday, April 4, 2011

grounded

I got grounded and did these pics

Tara . She's just a random person I made to go with a bit of writing that I plan to post to me email status sometime.
 Jade. She has no point. She's just there.
 John is emo. I only made him like that cuz all my stuff is happy pretty nice stuff so I wanted something different.
 It's possible I've put Kaybr up already I'm not really sure. In any case she's a jedi.
 Rollin is a normal girl. She has no magic or bending only her skills in hand to hand combat.
 Kyden is an amazon basically. She's got knives all over her and her red eyes sometimes burn like fire. It freaks people out, lucky for her it's only in direct sunlight and moonlight. Tho most people think it's just visual she can feel them burn.