Ello! Now for contest number 3! Best short story or writing sample. The winner was chosen at random as the other judge was being stubborn and wouldn't read the entries on the computer. Any way, the winner is..*drum roll*.. Journee!

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Journee
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Saturday, November 20, 2010

Bored part two

So here's part two of my post


     Jessie woke up the next morning, got dressed and went down stairs to fix breakfast before Austin and Steven woke up. She fixed scrambled eggs and bacon. She burned herself a few times with the bacon since she hadn't fixed it before but in the end it was nice and crispy. She got her part of the food and walked out onto the porch with it and sat down relaxing.
     Steven came down after getting dressed and got breakfast then walked onto the porch. He sat down next to Jessie and asked "Did Austin ever come home yesterday?" Jessie looked at him said "I figured he came home while we were playing Halo and we just didn't notice." Steven shook his head and replied "He wasn't in his room when I went to bed. I checked." Jessie looked down the road the direction of Desmond's house and thought "Where is he then?" Steven took at bite of bacon and asked "What are we gonna do if he isn't at Desmond's house?" Jessie answered Steven without shifting her gaze saying "Then we'll tell the police."
     Jessie got up and took her plate inside and put it in the dishwasher. She stood in the kitchen a few minutes thinking "If Austin is missing why would someone? Who would have kidnapped him?"  Then a new thought popped into her mind "What if  it's the same guy that was in Cranford?"
     She ran outside and past Steven down to the street and started towards Desmond's house. Steven ran after her asking "What's goin' on?" Jessie responded "We need to make sure Austin's with Desmond." as she ran. Steven kept pace with her and asked "Why?" Jessie looked at Steven out of the corner of her eye and said "I'll explain later." Steven saw it was useless to continue questioning her so the two ran in silence the rest of the way.
     When they got there they went up to the front door and knocked. Desmond opened the door and asked "What are you two doin' 'ere?" Jessie asked "Is Austin here?" quickly. Desmond shook his head and asked "Why did he say he was comin' over 'ere?" Steven said "Yesterday he got made at Jessie 'cause she sided with me and he said he was comin' here but he didn't come home last night." Desmond looked at Steven with a look of shock and said "You ain't jokin' are ya?" Jessie shook her head and said "Unfortunately he isn't."
     Desmond asked "What are ya gonna do?" Jessie answered "We are going to go to the police. Did you see the news report about guys like Austin going missing around here?" Desmond nodded so Jessie continued "Those boys only lived a week. I do not want to lose Austin. As much as a pain in the behind as he is he's still my brother." Desmond asked "Is there anythin' I can do to help?" Jessie shook her head and said "No but if we need you we will call you." Desmond nodded and said "I need to get back to what I was doin'." Jessie said goodbye and she started walking home with Steven.
     When they got to the house Jessie picked up the phone and called the police. She explained what was going on and they asked her to come to the station to talk. Jessie told Steven to stay at the house while she was gone. Steven looked at her and said "Good luck." as she walked out the front door.
     When she got to the police station a man walked up to her and said "I'm agent Ryder. Would you mind telling us exactly what is wrong?" Jessie nodded and said "Yesterday Austin and Steven got in a fight. Nothing new they do it all the time. I went to go see what it was about and Austin said they were just playing but Steven said Austin was picking on him. I told Austin to mind his own business. He walked off and said he was going to a friend's house. Me and Steven spent the rest of the day talking and playing video games. Austin was suppose to come home at sunset but Steven said he wouldn't be back until after dark. Steven went to bed before me. When I did go to bed I figured he came in while I wasn't paying attention. This morning I asked Steven if he had seen Austin and he said hadn't so" Jessie paused to take a breath then continued "I went to his friend's house and he never got there, that's when I called you."
     Agent Ryder nodded in confirming that he understood the situation. He asked "Where is Steven now?" Jessie replied "He's at the house. Why?" Agent Ryder answered her with "You're probably right about Austin. Question is who took him." Jessie said "Surely you know about the kidnapper in Cranford." Agent Ryder nodded and said "I do however that's out of my range." Jessie rolled her eyes and mumbled "Of course it is." then asked "Can you ask anyone for help? I know the stats of things like this and if this is like most things Austin will be dead by the time we find him."
     Agent Ryder looked at her and said "Due to the other kidnappings we will call the BAU and ask for help until then you need to go back to your house and wait for us to call you." Jessie asked "How long will it take for the BAU to get here?" Agent Ryder said simply "Depends on if they have an open case already." Jessie nodded and said "Then I'll be going." then stood and left.
     Steven ran out to Jessie and asked "What did they say?" when she neared the house. Jessie responded "They told us to wait for the BAU." Steven asked "Think they'll call you in as an intern for this case?"  Jessie shook her head and said "Not likely since he's my brother." Steven replied "True but that could also work to their advantage." Jessie gave Steven a crooked smile and said "Fair enough." then went to bed.

Part three coming soon
  (I really need a name for this!!!)

1 comment:

Journee said...

Lol; still looking great. :) Very nice.