Ello! Now for contest number 3! Best short story or writing sample. The winner was chosen at random as the other judge was being stubborn and wouldn't read the entries on the computer. Any way, the winner is..*drum roll*.. Journee!

Contestants:
Journee
Quinn

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Thursday, July 1, 2010

More writing

Here's more of the story I posted. It's called Jasper's Dream by the way.



Jason replied "I said I have something to show you but I meant show you if you don't believe me." Jasper asked "What do you mean if I don't believe you? Dude your my best friend. Why would you lie to me?" Jason sighed and said "I wouldn't lie to you but I have been hiding something from you." Jasper started to say something because Jason continued "I'm a werewolf." in a slow voice as if he didn't believe it himself. "Anything else?" Jasper asked Jason nodded and said "Yes but do you believe me?" Jasper nodded so Jason continued "People make fun of you because your..." Jason stopped to think of what to say then continued "Your different. No one knows how except me." Jasper looked him in the eye and asked "How am I different?" Jason said simply "You like the dark, your kinda creepy to me and everyong else at school thinks you crazy." Jasper asked "Your point?" getting impatient. Jason returned Jasper's gaze and said "You would have found out sooner or later and I feared it would be later so I am making sure it's sooner." Jason paused for a breath then said "Jasper...your a vampire."



Here's some of a different story called Kiri's Story.





3/5/2007

This is my first diary and my name is Kiri Delta Macleod.
I started this because my new best friend has 1. Her name
is Jessica Harp. She livs down the road from me with her
mommy, daddy and her big brother Mark Harp. I liv in
CA but i just moved here from TN. Jessica is 7 lik me and
Mark is 10. By the way i am a only kid.



3/6/2007

Mot much happened 2day. I got to go over to Jessica and
Mark's home after school and play with them. While i was
there Mark let me listen to a song called the Fight Song
by Sanctus Real and now i have this line stuck in my head:
Wet tissues stick to my shoes.
It's a funny line.

3 comments:

Journee said...

Niiiice! :)

I like how you do Kiri's dairy.

And Jasper's Dream is looking pretty good too!

Kay Broach said...

Thanks

Journee said...

You're welcome.